Stark commotion

So much noise
So much
Reverberating
Vibrating through and through
The commotion is stark
Startlingly stark
I close my ears
Pretending I do

6 thoughts on “Stark commotion”

Vicky Stratus says:

September 23, 2015 at 12:45 pm

Nice One…!!!!

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1. aplis7 says:
  
  September 23, 2015 at 12:46 pm
  
  Thank you!
  
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  1. Vicky Stratus says:
    
    September 23, 2015 at 12:53 pm
    
    Anytime…!!!! 🙂
    
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Nisthur Anadi says:

September 23, 2015 at 12:54 pm

Beautifully written

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1. aplis7 says:
  
  September 23, 2015 at 12:54 pm
  
  Thank you again :)))
  
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  1. Nisthur Anadi says:
    
    September 23, 2015 at 12:56 pm
    
    ☺
    
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